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21 September 2008
- 18:4818:48, 21 September 2008 diff hist −4 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines →Sentence Formation
- 18:4718:47, 21 September 2008 diff hist +618 Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines Added section about sentence variation as a tool to keep reader engaged and following along with the information.
- 18:3518:35, 21 September 2008 diff hist +471 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines Expanded on the idea of sentence formation and how it impacts documentation. Included a list of words that reduce the impact of writing.
- 18:1618:16, 21 September 2008 diff hist +1,355 Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines Expanding more information on Sentence Formation
- 17:5617:56, 21 September 2008 diff hist −38 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines Removed passive voice from example.
- 17:5317:53, 21 September 2008 diff hist +2 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines Added space because examples were hard to read.
- 17:5117:51, 21 September 2008 diff hist +200 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines Came up with a better example os using antecedents to break up longer sentences.
- 17:4617:46, 21 September 2008 diff hist +997 Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines Defined pronouns and explained why their use hinders a reader's comprehension. Gave a full example of what is meant by antecedent
- 03:0203:02, 21 September 2008 diff hist +1 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines →Contractions
- 03:0103:01, 21 September 2008 diff hist +105 Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines Defines a contraction and explains more clearly why use should be avoided.
- 02:0402:04, 21 September 2008 diff hist +140 Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines Defined tense in case writers do not know what it is, and made the instructions clearer.
- 01:2301:23, 21 September 2008 diff hist −47 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines Cleaned up text, to make the message stronger about accuracy and precision.
- 01:1001:10, 21 September 2008 diff hist +14 Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines Gave clearer instructions on appopriate uses for emphasis and gives alternative ways to emphasis material.
- 01:0301:03, 21 September 2008 diff hist +74 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines Gave a way to still provide extemporaneous information while still staying in context by allowing links to other pertinent information.
- 01:0001:00, 21 September 2008 diff hist +3 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines Upon rereading the active voice definition was a little murky. Cleaned up the text to make it more clear.
- 00:5800:58, 21 September 2008 diff hist −16 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines shortened the last sentence to remove extra unneeded words.
19 September 2008
- 07:1707:17, 19 September 2008 diff hist −20 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines fixed indirect to driect object (Typo, and clarified last sentence)
- 06:5406:54, 19 September 2008 diff hist +133 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines Problem with definition of passive voice, it mixes in clarity advice and muddles the definition.
- 05:4205:42, 19 September 2008 diff hist −26 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - General Guidelines changed being with a concrete verb "sounding" removed indirect discourse (that) and dropped "or does not" because the formatting is not clear link to previous sentence about standing behind work.
18 September 2008
- 21:5621:56, 18 September 2008 diff hist −82 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - Introduction to Style Removed apostrophe (we are fedora doc. proj, not fedora's), streamlined wording in last paragraph