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18 September 2008
- 21:5021:50, 18 September 2008 diff hist +1 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - Introduction to Style First time use in paragraph Fedora Documentation Style Guide should be spelled out, removed language that was "can be" "may be" to give clear message.
- 20:0820:08, 18 September 2008 diff hist −4 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - Introduction to Style provides was an awkward verb for an inanimate style guide, it is more of an outline, and used independent clause to make the last sentence mroe clear. Easy-to-read was in the paragraph twice.
- 19:5619:56, 18 September 2008 diff hist −6 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - Introduction to Style Writing is generally used as a verb in this paragraph, better to use a clear noun like documentation or content to aid in translation efforts. Tightened up last sentence so it sticks.
- 19:3319:33, 18 September 2008 diff hist −17 m Archive:Docs Project Style Guide - Introduction to Style Remove indirect discoure (that are) as it is unneeded, changed wording to shorten and strengthen first sentence.
- 18:0518:05, 18 September 2008 diff hist −31 m F8 User Guide - Desktops →The Fedora Desktops